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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my sentence

My mind is restless & heart too, though i'm trying to make it control, it won't. Hopefully i found the reason, why? So, lastly i decided to leave it as it iz because the reason is half life of my own.
  

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Perhaps you mean this: My mind is restless and my heart is, too. Though I'm trying to control them, they won't be controlled. I hope I've found the reason why.

  • Perhaps you mean this: My mind is restless and my heart is, too.
  • Though I'm trying to control them, they won't be controlled.
  • I hope I've found the reason why.
  • However, I've finally decided to leave them as they are because I have a life of my own.
  • Or perhaps not.
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Perhaps you mean this:

My mind is restless and my heart is, too. Though I'm trying to control them, they won't be controlled. I hope I've found the reason why. However, I've finally decided to leave them as they are because I have a life of my own.

Or perhaps not.

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