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Ahmedm Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my sentence

Please correct this:

"I totally understand your suggestion, but at the moment our chiller system start on second floor to onward, so I think its not possible to install chiller on first floor because we have required proper ducting and more cooling capacity.

As far as my understanding and suggestion if we have decided to extra cooling require in abc data center so we have to purchase in row cooling system its better then chiller.

I hope you can undersatnd."

Thanks in advance.

MA
  

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I completely understand your suggestion, but at the moment our chiller system runs from the second floor upwards. [?? I'm guessing that by "onward" you mean "upwards"] so I think it's not possible to install a chiller on the first floor because we have required proper ducting and more cooling capacity .

— Mr Wordy

  • I completely understand your suggestion, but at the moment our chiller system runs from the second floor upwards.
  • [??
  • I'm guessing that by "onward" you mean "upwards"] so I think it's not possible to install a chiller on the first floor because we have required proper ducting and more cooling capacity .
  • [??
  • ] As far as my understanding and suggestion if we have decided to extra cooling require in abc data center so we have to purchase in row cooling system its better then chiller.
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I completely understand your suggestion, but at the moment our chiller system runs from the second floor upwards. [?? I'm guessing that by "onward" you mean "upwards"] so I think it's not possible to install a chiller on the first floor because we have required proper ducting and more cooling capacity. [?? I'm guessing that you mean either
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I think the correct term is "in-line cooling", not "in row cooling"
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AlpheccaStars
I think the correct term is "in-line cooling", not "in row cooling"


There are actually more Google hits for "in-row cooling system" than for "in-line cooling system". Not that this necessarily means anything of course...
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You're probably right, Mr W.
The in-line cooling systems are for liquid cooling - like milk or water for mining operations. In-row cooling (in-rack cooling) is for data centers with high density of rack-mounted servers.
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Yes you all right right, in-row cooling is a technical term which is especially used in data center cooling systems and APC is the poineer of these systems. Once again many thanks for the great support.

cheers!!!
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how about this sentence:

"Before given a suggestion please check the pros n cons of the whole environment rather then give the straight forward suggestions."

thanks in advance.

MA
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ahmedmhow about this sentence:

"Before given a suggestion please check the pros n cons of the whole environment rather then give the straight forward suggestions."


This has a few problems. You could say:

"Before adopting any suggestions, we need to consider the pros and cons in relation to our operating environment as a whole.
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Please correct this its very urgent:

"Thanks for your mail, at moment we are totally stuck up with SOAP server errors and I understand this issue will be resolved in next release in June. But we can't wait for June because we have faced the penalties from regularly authorities. I'd suggest to please take a urgent action on it and resolve our issues on priority basis."

Thanks
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Ahmed, when you want to ask a new question it's best to start a new thread. That way more people are likely to look at it.

Thanks for your mail. At the moment we are totally stuck up with SOAP server errors. [?? I'm not completely sure what you mean by "stuck up", but I imagine you mean something like "At the moment we are very seriously affected
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Thank you wordy for the support..
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