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Chitra08 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my sentence

Dear Sir,



This is time to renewal our website. Here I sending the billing statement from the service provider. The bill shows that payment is on receipt. If we don’t pay this bill in time our site will be stop working. I request you to do useful for this. Please let me know whom should I send this bill?



Thanks.

(please make any corrections, and make it good)
  

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Dear Mr [surname], It is time to renew our website , and I am enclosing a copy of the invoice from the service provider. The invoic e indicates that payment is on receipt. If we don’t pay this bill in a timely fashion, our site will be shut down.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Mr [surname], It is time to renew our website , and I am enclosing a copy of the invoice from the service provider.
  • The invoic e indicates that payment is on receipt.
  • If we don’t pay this bill in a timely fashion, our site will be shut down.
  • Please let me know to whom I should send this bil l.
  • Thank you very much for your help.
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Dear Mr [surname],



It is time to renew our website, and I am enclosing a copy of the invoice from the service provider. The invoice indicates that payment is on receipt. If we don’t pay this bill in a timely fashion, our site will be shut down. Please let me know to whom I should send th
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