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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Business & Finance

Please correct my sentence.



Dear Mr.YYY

Greeting from ABC company.First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is XXX purchaser from XXX limited. I have attached the XXX machine purchasing order for your reference. Please send us the proforma invoice to refer the payment.

If you have any problems, please do not hesitate to contact us.

Best regards,

XXX

--------------------- Please correct my sentenc if you have more suggesstions please add them into the sentence. ---------------------------

Thank you very much

Mina.

  

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**** Mina, Here are a couple of marked corrections. Check out my changes in bold. Overall great work though!

— Moduffycobb

  • **** Mina, Here are a couple of marked corrections.
  • Check out my changes in bold.
  • Overall great work though!
  • Hope this helps.
  • Mo.
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**** Mina,

Here are a couple of marked corrections. Check out my changes in bold. Overall great work though! Hope this helps.

Mo.


Dear Mr.YYY,

Greetings from ABC company. First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is *** and I am a purchaser from *** limited.

I have attacheded the purchase orde
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Thank you very much.

Mina.
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i tried to forget u ,but i can't because i love u so much. do u love me?then why u like this?
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