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Excitekps Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct my sentence

Sir,

As per your email dated September 15, 2008, you are already agreed 5% discount on item number 2 in your invoice number 41857 (TPP 1600 pcs). So please revise the invoice.



Best rgd’s

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Sir, Regarding your email dated September 15, 2008, you agreed to a 5% discount on item number 2 in invoice number 41857 (TPP 1600 pcs). Please revise the invoice. Thank-you.

  • Sir, Regarding your email dated September 15, 2008, you agreed to a 5% discount on item number 2 in invoice number 41857 (TPP 1600 pcs).
  • Please revise the invoice.
  • Thank-you.
  • If I understood correctly what you were trying to say, this is what I would write.
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Sir,

Regarding your email dated September 15, 2008, you agreed to a 5% discount on item number 2 in invoice number 41857 (TPP 1600 pcs). Please revise the invoice. Thank-you.

If I understood correctly what you were trying to say, this is what I would write.

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