Please correct my sentence

My suggestion is [that] we [should] discuss it after we receive the e-mail.

or, perhaps more relaxed:

I suggest [that] we discuss it after we receive the e-mail.

Thank you dear..


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Is this sentence correct

Thanks for your mail. Please find my attached certificates, Mark sheets with my address proof. I am confirmed my date of joining on 5th January 2009.

Before my joining date, I want soft copy of my offer letter in word format. If is there any details you want, please let me know.

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(Do not address unknown persons as 'dear', Ahmed.)

Thanks for your mail. Please find my certificates and mark sheets with my proof of address attached. I confirm my attendance date on 5 January 2009.

Before my attendance, I would like a soft copy of my offer letter in Word format. If is there is any further information y

1.- You CANNOT skip the expression "THAT" after IS or after ARE, because in such a case it can be translated as: "THE FOLLOWING".

2.- Every time you use a Preposition (AFTER), you Must use the Verb+ING.

My suggestion is THAT we should discuss it (THE ISSUE) AFTER receivING the email.

Otherwise, if you still want to use the word RECEIVED, you must say:

please correct my sentence "should you contact me , if any further information is needed

machine will prompt you that you have left with enouh balanc or minutes.

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Please contact me if any further information is needed.

The machine will prompt you as to whether you have a sufficient balance or minutes.
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