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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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please correct my sentence

I was absent from *** through *** due to a severe headache. I went to consult doctor but the doctor told me to wear a spectacle then only the pain would reduce. So, I ordered for the spectacle in a optical shop and they asked me to come after three days to get my spects. So, I had been absent from college as I had continuous headache during these three days. Now I am perfectly alright and I can attend my college regularly. I hope you don't take any severe action against me.





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I was absent from *** through/to *** because of a severe headache. I went to the doctor, and he told me to wear spectacles/glasses; only then would the pain decrease. So I ordered spectacles/glasses from an optical shop, and they told me to come and get my glasses 3 days later.

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  • I was absent from *** through/to *** because of a severe headache.
  • I went to the doctor, and he told me to wear spectacles/glasses; only then would the pain decrease.
  • So I ordered spectacles/glasses from an optical shop, and they told me to come and get my glasses 3 days later.
  • I had continuous headaches during those 3 days, that's why I was absent from college.
  • Now I'm perfectly all right, and I can attend classes regularly.
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I was absent from *** through/to *** because of a severe headache. I went to the doctor, and he told me to wear spectacles/glasses; only then would the pain decrease. So I ordered spectacles/glasses from an optical shop, and they told me to come and get my glasses 3 days later. I had continuous headaches during those 3 days, that's why I was absent from college. Now I'm perfectly all right, and I
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AnonymousI was absent from *** through *** due to a severe headache. I went to consult a/my/the doctor but the doctor he/she told me to wear spectacles and then only the pain would reduce. So I ordered for the spectacle in a optica
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Can we use, on account of a severe headache as alternative to "due to/because of a headache" in this context?

Please help me.
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Yes, I think so, since it means "because"
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