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Jimmyyl Posted 20 years ago
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please correct my sentence
Hi all,
Is there any problem with the following sentence? Any way to make it better?
Since the VOIP equipments, like the end user phone, are all compatible with the current internet, many advanced communication applications that are not found before becomes possible.
Thanks
Is there any problem with the following sentence? Any way to make it better?
Since the VOIP equipments, like the end user phone, are all compatible with the current internet, many advanced communication applications that are not found before becomes possible.
Thanks
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Since the VOIP equipments, similarly to the end-user phone, are all compatible with the current Internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasible, have become possible.
- Since the VOIP equipments, similarly to the end-user phone, are all compatible with the current Internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasible, have become possible.
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Since the VOIP equipments, similarly to the end-user phone, are all compatible
with the current Internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasible, have become possible.
with the current Internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasible, have become possible.
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Hi,
'Equipment' is uncountable so don't speak of 'equipments'.
'The current internet' is a correct but uncommon phrase. It makes the reader start to think a bit about how the future internet might differ from the current internet.
What is 'an end-user phone'? Isn't every phone, whether land-line or cellular, a phone used by 'end-users'?
Best wishes, Clive
'Equipment' is uncountable so don't speak of 'equipments'.
'The current internet' is a correct but uncommon phrase. It makes the reader start to think a bit about how the future internet might differ from the current internet.
What is 'an end-user phone'? Isn't every phone, whether land-line or cellular, a phone used by 'end-users'?
Best wishes, Clive
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Thank you very much for your reply. I cannot use English to express precisely. The following is an extraction from my written English. Can someone point out the places that need to be improved?
VOIP is also called broadband phone. It routes the phone call through internet.
It is one of the major evolution of IT industry in the next 5 years.
Since the VOIP equipment,
VOIP is also called broadband phone. It routes the phone call through internet.
It is one of the major evolution of IT industry in the next 5 years.
Since the VOIP equipment,
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Hi,
VOIP is also called broadband phone service. It routes phone calls through the internet.
It will be one of the major evolutions of the IT industry in the next 5 years.
Since VOIP equipment, (I mean for example here) like the phone on your desk, is compatible with the current internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasibl
VOIP is also called broadband phone service. It routes phone calls through the internet.
It will be one of the major evolutions of the IT industry in the next 5 years.
Since VOIP equipment, (I mean for example here) like the phone on your desk, is compatible with the current internet, many advanced communication applications, previously unfeasibl
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