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Prawit-_- Posted 18 years ago
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Please correct my resume again

0Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below. 02br
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  • 00Assisted in safety pillar activities to receive the Award for TPM Excellence.02li
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00Thank you.02br
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00Prawit0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below. 02font 02li 02ul 00I don't know waht a 'safety pillar' is. 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below.
  • 02font 02li 02ul 00I don't know waht a 'safety pillar' is.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below. 02font02br
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  • 01font00Assisted in safety pillar activities01b00 and received02b00 the Award for TPM Excellence.02fon
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0Thank you for your suggestion. 02br
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00Can I write "00Assisted in safety activities01b00 01font00to achieve02font00 02b00the Award for TPM Excellence."?02br
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00I would like to show recruitment managers that my company got the award and I involved in safety activies.02br
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0Hi,02br
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00You normally 01i01u00receive02u02i00 an award. Or you could say01u00 01i00gain.02i02u02br
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00Clive0-
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