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Prawit-_- Posted 18 years ago
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Please correct my resume

0Please correct my resume as below, thank you.02br
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01b01u00OBJECTIVE02u02b02br
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00A position as a Human Resources Officer.02br
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01b01u00SKILLS02u02b02br
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  • 00Proficient in Microsoft Office package.02li
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  • 00Familiar with Adobe Photoshop.02li
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  • 00TOEIC Score = 62002li
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01b01u00WORK EXPERIENCE02u02b01u00 02u02br
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01b00xxxxyz Co., Ltd., Chonburi 2003 - Present02b02br
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01b00Safety Staff02b02br
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  • 00Trained employees in basic safety and fire protection.02li
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  • 00Prepared accident reports for safety committee meeting.02li
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  • 00Prepared power consumption reports for environment committee meeting.02li
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  • 00Created safety magazines to distribute to employees.02li
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  • 00Promoted safety activities to reduce amount of accidents.02li
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  • 00Responsible for safety inspection to employees and subcontractors.02li
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  • 00Measured environmental condition in workplaces.02li
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01b00xxx&xxx Ltd., Partnership, Chonburi 2002 - 200302b02br
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01b00Foreman02b02br
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  • 00Supervised and distributed work to employees.02li
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  • 00Coordinated with industrial company to buy metal scraps.02li
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01b01u00EDUCATION02u02b02br
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00Bachelor of Political Science, 2008 02br
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00Major: International Relations and Comparative Governments and Politics02br
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00xxxxx University, Bangkok02br
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01b01u00REFERENCES02u02b02br
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00Available upon request.0-
  

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02br 01b 01i 00It looks very good to me, Prawit. 0-

  • 02br 01b 01i 00It looks very good to me, Prawit.
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01b01i00It looks very good to me, Prawit. I have indicated a few corrections in bold:02i02b02br
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01b01u00OBJECTIVE02u02b02br
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00A position as a Human Resources Officer.02br
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01b01u00SKILLS02u02b
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0Mister Micawber, thank you very much. I will revise the resume as your suggestion.02br
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00Prawit0-

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