Please correct my poem, thank you
Grandma,
I left my tiny fingerprints all upon your walls,
messes I made with toys scattered up and down your halls.
You had sleepless nights and stressful days and yet always made the time when I wanted to play.
Soon enough I will grow, and my tiny fingerprints will fade away.
Before they do I want to say how much I truly love you, and appreciate each and every one of those days!
So Here's # keepsake I made for you to treasure,
my 2-year-old fingerprints for all those wonderful months we spent together.
Top answer
It's beautiful. Capitalize "messes", lowercase "Here's", replace "#" with "a", capitalize "my", and you're there.
- It's beautiful.
- Capitalize "messes", lowercase "Here's", replace "#" with "a", capitalize "my", and you're there.
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It's beautiful. Capitalize "messes", lowercase "Here's", replace "#" with "a", capitalize "my", and you're there.
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