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Question: The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.
Units: per 100 inhabit
Answer:
The glance at the graph provided data on how many people used different communication services in the earth in a decade.
While the numbers of lendline service fell, there were rises in the figures of the rest of other services. The figure of fixed broadband in a 4-year period did not change.
Between 1998 and 2006, while there was a slight growth in lendline service, internet service, mobile broadband and fixed broadband , cellular phone service shoot up rapidly.
From 2006 to 2008, cellular phone service reached the highest point of 65 per 100 inhabitans in 2008. Lendline service go down slightly.
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A glance at The graph provides data gives us details on the different communication services used by people in a decade. While the number of landline services fell, there was a rise in the number of the rest of the services. The figure of fixed broadband did not change in a 4-year period.
- A glance at The graph provides data gives us details on the different communication services used by people in a decade.
- While the number of landline services fell, there was a rise in the number of the rest of the services.
- The figure of fixed broadband did not change in a 4-year period.
- Between 1998 and 2006, while there was a slight growth in landline service, there was a rapid growth in the internet service, mobile broadband and fixed broadband , and cellular phone services.
- From 2006 to 2008, cellular phone service reached the highest point of 65 per 100 inhabitants in 2008 and landline service went down slightly.
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A glance at The graph provides data gives us details on the different communication services used by people in a decade.
While the number of landline services fell, there was a rise in the number of the rest of the services. The figure of fixed broadband did not change in a 4-year period.
Between 1998 and 2006, while there was a slight growth in landline serv
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