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Dilshi Posted 10 years ago
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Please correct my paragraph

The day you hold my hand for the first time at light house and the day you kissed me, it all melt my heart when I remember those lovely moments.
No one is better than you, for me sweetheart
  

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dilshiThe day you hold held my hand for the first time at the lighthouse and the day you kissed me were so special. , it all melt My heart melts when I remember those lovely moments.
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