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Nofeela Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct my paragraph
Hello every body ..... this is my descriptive paragraph ..could you please correct it.....
When I was small, at my first year at school. My old sister had made a party
For me because I was the best student in my class. My sister Rasha is an Arabic teacher .she love teaching. she taught me the difficult lessons I had. she is good in every thing. One day at my grandfather's house , my sister rash cooked a KABSAH –an Arabic dish- for lunch, it was the best KABSAH I ever eat. My sister Rasha is kind with all children. And they love her a lot because she is always give them sweets and toys. She also kind with my parents. She helped my mother in the housework. And she is good with my father too. when she got married, I cried and I told her: you can not leave us, but said : I will not leave you . and she told me that she will come to see me every day, and that pleased me . after a year of her marriage, she had a baby , and she call her Reema . she was very beautiful. I love her a lot, because she is my nephew. Now I think I become like my sister . I trying to be like her because she is my ideal.
When I was small, at my first year at school. My old sister had made a party
For me because I was the best student in my class. My sister Rasha is an Arabic teacher .she love teaching. she taught me the difficult lessons I had. she is good in every thing. One day at my grandfather's house , my sister rash cooked a KABSAH –an Arabic dish- for lunch, it was the best KABSAH I ever eat. My sister Rasha is kind with all children. And they love her a lot because she is always give them sweets and toys. She also kind with my parents. She helped my mother in the housework. And she is good with my father too. when she got married, I cried and I told her: you can not leave us, but said : I will not leave you . and she told me that she will come to see me every day, and that pleased me . after a year of her marriage, she had a baby , and she call her Reema . she was very beautiful. I love her a lot, because she is my nephew. Now I think I become like my sister . I trying to be like her because she is my ideal.
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In the first year of my school, when I was a kid, my elder sister had given a party for me because I was adjudged the best student in my class. My sister Rasha teaches Arabic; she loves teaching! She always helps me with my lessons.
- In the first year of my school, when I was a kid, my elder sister had given a party for me because I was adjudged the best student in my class.
- My sister Rasha teaches Arabic; she loves teaching!
- She always helps me with my lessons.
- She is good at everything she does!
- Once, at my grandfather's home, Rasha cooked Kabsah - an Arabic dish- for lunch.
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In the first year of my school, when I was a kid, my elder sister had given a party for me because I was adjudged the best student in my class. My sister Rasha teaches Arabic; she loves teaching! She always helps me with my lessons. She is good at everything she does! Once, at my grandfather's home, Rasha cooked Kabsah - an Arabic dish- for lunch. It was the best Kabsah I had ever e
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