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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my paragraph

"The occupancy date is November28" replied Ms. Jackson
  

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Anonymous "The occupancy date is November28" replied Ms. Jackson "The date of (the) occupancy is November 28th", replied Ms. " is my suggestion.

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  • Anonymous "The occupancy date is November28" replied Ms.
  • Jackson "The date of (the) occupancy is November 28th", replied Ms.
  • " is my suggestion.
  • I'm not an native speaker nor do I have any degrees, so you might want to wait.
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Anonymous"The occupancy date is November28" replied Ms. Jackson

"The date of (the) occupancy is November 28th", replied Ms. Jackson." is my suggestion. I'm not an native speaker nor do I have any degrees, so you might want to wait.
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