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Forlan Posted 17 years ago
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hi forums,
please correct my paragraph
You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish. Since this fish is peaceful fish, you can care with another peaceful fish. You can put ornament to the aquarium like dried wood or gravel. You have better to put colorific ornament so the black phantom could be seen. The fish like water plant too. You can add common water plant such as sword plant, cabomba, etc at your phantom aquarium.
please correct my paragraph
You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish. Since this fish is peaceful fish, you can care with another peaceful fish. You can put ornament to the aquarium like dried wood or gravel. You have better to put colorific ornament so the black phantom could be seen. The fish like water plant too. You can add common water plant such as sword plant, cabomba, etc at your phantom aquarium.
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I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words: You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon , bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10 -gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish.
- I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words: You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon , bowl, etc.
- One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium.
- If you have 10 -gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish.
- Since this fish is peaceful fish, you can care with another peaceful fish.
- You can put ornament to the aquarium like dried wood or gravel.
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I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words:
You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish. Since this fish is peaceful fish, you can care with another p
I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words:
You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put 10 fish. Since this fish is peaceful fish, you can care with another p
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hi forums,
would you please to edit my false.
would you please to edit my false.
Mister Micawber.
I have underlined problem areas and stricken out inappropriate words:
You can choose any shape of aquarium such as cubic, hexagon, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish is uits for one gallon aquarium. If you have 10-gallon aquarium, you can put 10
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Please try it yourself first, and we will check the effort that you have made.
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Please try it yourself first, and we will check the effort that you have made.
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i have tried to correct my paragraph
You can choose any shape of aquarium example: as cubic, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish suits for one gallon aquarium. If you have ten-gallon aquarium, you can put ten fish. Since the fish is a peaceful fish, you can care it with another peaceful fish. You can put the aquarium ornament like dried wood or gravel. You may put full color ornaments s
You can choose any shape of aquarium example: as cubic, polygon, bowl, etc. One fish suits for one gallon aquarium. If you have ten-gallon aquarium, you can put ten fish. Since the fish is a peaceful fish, you can care it with another peaceful fish. You can put the aquarium ornament like dried wood or gravel. You may put full color ornaments s
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You can choose any shape of aquarium, for example, cubic, polygonal, bowl-shaped, etc. A one-gallon aquarium is suitable for one fish. If you have a ten-gallon aquarium, you can put in ten fish. Since the Black Phantom is a peaceful fish, you can care for it with other peaceful fish. You can put in aquarium ornaments like dried
You can choose any shape of aquarium, for example, cubic, polygonal, bowl-shaped, etc. A one-gallon aquarium is suitable for one fish. If you have a ten-gallon aquarium, you can put in ten fish. Since the Black Phantom is a peaceful fish, you can care for it with other peaceful fish. You can put in aquarium ornaments like dried
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thaks mr micwaber
Your explanation is very clear [Y]
Would you please to give me any suggest to improve my paragraph ?
Your explanation is very clear [Y]
Would you please to give me any suggest to improve my paragraph ?
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As it stands, it is OK. It may need reorganization or other changes when it is in the rest of the essay.
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As it stands, it is OK. It may need reorganization or other changes when it is in the rest of the essay.
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I often wonder how old people manage to stay happy.Especially when their health fails.one afternoon i expressed this wonderment to my 85-year-old grandmother.Because I felt it important to find an answer. she was in her wheelchair. having suffered a broken hip last year. i sat in a chair next to her. Thingking about how frail she had gottten. Though i didn't really know exactly what words to use.
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Please review it first for capitalization. The first person singular pronoun should always be capitalized, as should the letter which begins each sentence.
Also, check that every sentence has an independent, finite verb.
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Please review it first for capitalization. The first person singular pronoun should always be capitalized, as should the letter which begins each sentence.
Also, check that every sentence has an independent, finite verb.
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