Please correct my motivation letter..help..help

hi there please help me correcting my motivation letter..
thank you alot..

Dear Sir or Madam,
I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new since I was small. This has become a habit and not solely a routine for me in my life that affects my point of view in learning. It serves as a catalyst for me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting this scholarship programme is nothing more than just a step towards my future plan of self-development. I have lived my whole life in the same country, in the same city, so my dearest dream is to study abroad after I graduate high school. I love my hometown but feel a strong need to discover new cultures and gain new experience Having the chance of studying abroad and meeting an outstanding people and place have always been the most idealistic ambition in my life since young. Studying at the Belgrade Summer School 2009 Programme will provide me with the knowledge and change of scene that I crave. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am strongly interested in knowing a different style of living, and I think that it offers even more than cultural delights and entertainment. I am sure that it will be both a personal and academic enrichment. this type of challenge can help me to discover what is truly hidden inside me.
My education has not completed yet. I have been attending the University of Indonesia, one of the elite and well-known as a one step a head universities in Indonesia, majoring dentistry for 3,5 years now. First, i attended a test in 2005 and i got major chemistry. I enjoyed studying chemistry but my dreams, when i was a kid, i would became a dentist. On the 2006, i attended the test twice and i got that faculty.i choose dentistry because dentist treat people, not just teeth and mouths. They interact with people of all ages, cultures and personalities. The dentist's typical day is diverse and interesting and also personal satisfaction, a career in dentistry is personally fulfilling. Dentists perform an important public service to help people maintain their health and appearance. To serve the present and future oral health needs of their patients, dentists enjoy the challenge of a lifetime of learning. Tomorrow's dentists will be at the cutting edge of high technology, making the practice of dentistry even more exciting and rewarding than it is today. Dentist also provide an essential health care service (prestige). They are highly respected within the community. Dentists are skilled, conscientious, civic-minded individuals who work with community leaders, educators, other health professionals and government officials. They often volunteer services to school health programs and to elderly, handicapped or poor citizens, demonstrating a selflessness that is a hallmark of professionalism.
As a member of new generation, I wish I could make significant contributions to the future in my chosen field of study.
During the last two years of my studies, i received the scholarship. It helped me alot to pay my necessity. I have a chanced to be a teacher of music but it just for while. Teaching is, like police and emergency work, a cornerstone profession that is woefully undervalued. Make no mistake, teaching, when done right, is a tough job. Try to make the student troubles more tolerable and accept them as unique beings. I cannot even describe how satisfied and happy I always feel while working with them.
My english language skill are based on my course experiences in EEC (English Education Center), one of the best place for stdying english in Jakarta. I spent almost two years. This two-years coursing experience could give me a chance to improve my english language skills.
Personally, I am willingly to accept criticisms and new ideas from others and can easily work as a team, bearing in mind always to be tolerant, hard-working, flexible and organized. In addition, I would love the experience of meeting people from all around the world, learning other cultures and new languages.
With my academic background in the relevant field, I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this scholarship programme. I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favourable consideration and accepted. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,