Please correct my Motivation Letter

0 00Dear Sir or Madam;01i00I am writing to express my great interest in applying for 02i00PhD position for international projects in software services at the XXX University, Netherlands. In the following letter I would like to present my reasons for choosing this program and to provide a general background about me. 00First of all I would like to introduce myself. My name is Y H K and I am a Korean. I received a bachelor of Electronic Engineering degree from Seoul National University in 2002 and now I am an undertaking master student in X National University of Korea. This semester is the last semester of my master study.00My major, however, was electronic engineering; I studied many subjects related to computer science. From that time, I was really fascinated to computer science more than electronics also I think that computer science is convenient for the women, more than electronics.00 00During my master study, I participated in two international conferences XXX00-2005 in China and XXX-2006 in Japan, 00and published one paper in the XXXX journal which is the one of the IT journals of Korea. I was participated in two projects, which is named “XXX” and “00XXX”.00 00My goal is to become a good expert as so to work for a high tech company. In order to enter such a good company, I need to improve some of my competencies. Firstly, my previous experience is just at university research level. Now it is time to get some practical and industrial knowledge. Secondly, the important thing to improve is my communication skills including my English (particularly speaking), Dutch, different cultures, and team working so on. 00Finally, I think PhD position for international projects in software services at the XXX University is an excellent place to start my career and the program seems like the perfect opportunity for me to meet other cultures, 01a01span00learn another language02span02a00 and experience European educational system as well as gain more independence.00Kindly contact me if you require any further details or documents. I hope to hear from you in the near future.00Thank you for considering my application and your time.00Yours faithfully,0-