Please correct my Motivation letter....

I am applying to this program as it has always been my hope to have a chance to further my studies in the field of computer science or software engineering in a country which is renowned for advanced technology and civilization. I have decided that France is the best country where I can gain knowledge and skills in computer technology by let my hands on your expertise with would make me become an excellent software developer in my country.
I got a B.Sc. in computer science. Besides, I took pride in the fact that I was in the top of my class. As a cadet, I earned a reputation as an enthusiastic learner. I always keep abreast of software technology and Internet applications. In addition, I was lucky to have been offered an opportunity to work for Media Touch, which is a company dealing in Internet applications and website development.
During the two-year stint in the company, I obtained a lot of knowledge and technical skills. The more knowledge I gained, the more I found the science about computer intriguing. As a result of my dedication to studies and hard work, I was awarded the best and the brightest student of the year 2004 by the Ministry of Education.
I have always attached great value to the power of computers especially in the field of computer science and software engineering. I strongly believe that my expertise and the ability to work as a team leader will qualify me for the program.
With the knowledge, skills and valuable experience I expect to gain while I am on your program (of studies), I can make a worthwhile contribution to an organization in my country for which I’m going to work in the near future.