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Denna1001 Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my mistakes.
1. From downstairs more glass broke, Margaret sighed.
2. He cursed, his arms flaired in the air and he stared hostile.
2. He cursed, his arms flaired in the air and he stared hostile.
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1. From downstairs more glass broke, Margaret sighed. I'm not really sure what you mean to say in this passage.
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- From downstairs more glass broke, Margaret sighed.
- I'm not really sure what you mean to say in this passage.
- Here are my best guesses: a) Downstairs more glass broke.
- Margaret sighed.
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1. From downstairs more glass broke, Margaret sighed.
I'm not really sure what you mean to say in this passage. Here are my best guesses:
a) Downstairs more glass broke. Margaret sighed.
b) Margaret sighed when, from downstairs, she heard more glass breaking.
2. He cursed, his arms flaired in the air and he stared hostile.
He cursed, flail
I'm not really sure what you mean to say in this passage. Here are my best guesses:
a) Downstairs more glass broke. Margaret sighed.
b) Margaret sighed when, from downstairs, she heard more glass breaking.
2. He cursed, his arms flaired in the air and he stared hostile.
He cursed, flail
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