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Franklifetravel Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct my mistakes
0 Visiting Grouse Mountain 02 br
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00 Today my friends and I have visited Grouse Mountain, Vancouver, Canada (see 01 a 05 0 00 02 a 00 ). We planned to visit it last week. In the morning, we made an appointment at New Westminster at 8.00 am. We took the skytrain to the Waterfront station, getting on the seabus to another bank and taking the bus no.236 to Grouse Mountain. We arrived there at around 10.00 am. We were almost chocked if we had to pay for the ticket $35, but after visiting, everybody was satisafied to visit it because they, except me, have never seen the snow. 0240href http://www.britishcolumbia.com/attractions/?id=27
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00 Today my friends and I have visited Grouse Mountain, Vancouver, Canada (see 01 a 05 0 00 02 a 00 ). We planned to visit it last week. In the morning, we made an appointment at New Westminster at 8.00 am. We took the skytrain to the Waterfront station, getting on the seabus to another bank and taking the bus no.236 to Grouse Mountain. We arrived there at around 10.00 am. We were almost chocked if we had to pay for the ticket $35, but after visiting, everybody was satisafied to visit it because they, except me, have never seen the snow. 0240href http://www.britishcolumbia.com/attractions/?id=27
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0 Hi Frank, 02 br 02 br 00 Welcome to the forums. 02 br 02 br 00 Today my friends and I 01 del 00 have 02 del 00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 Vancouver, Canada. 01 font 00 Usually with a specific day, use simple past.
- 0 Hi Frank, 02 br 02 br 00 Welcome to the forums.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Today my friends and I 01 del 00 have 02 del 00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 Vancouver, Canada.
- 01 font 00 Usually with a specific day, use simple past.
- 02 font 02 br 02 br 00 We planned to visit it last week.
- 01 font 00 Does this mean you meant to go last week, but something changed your plans?
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0 Hi Frank, 02 br
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00 Welcome to the forums. Your main problem seems to be tense. 02 br
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00 Today my friends and I 01 del 00 have 02 del 00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01 b 00 in 02 b 00 Vancouver, Canada. 01 font 00 Usually with a specific day, use simple past. Present perfect is possible, but
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00 Welcome to the forums. Your main problem seems to be tense. 02 br
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00 Today my friends and I 01 del
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0 Thank you for correcting my writing. Now I think I get more understanding about grammar usage. 0-
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