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Franklifetravel Posted 18 years ago
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Please correct my mistakes

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00Today my friends and I have visited Grouse Mountain, Vancouver, Canada (see 01a05000 02a00). We planned to visit it last week. In the morning, we made an appointment at New Westminster at 8.00 am. We took the skytrain to the Waterfront station, getting on the seabus to another bank and taking the bus no.236 to Grouse Mountain. We arrived there at around 10.00 am. We were almost chocked if we had to pay for the ticket $35, but after visiting, everybody was satisafied to visit it because they, except me, have never seen the snow.0240hrefhttp://www.britishcolumbia.com/attractions/?id=27
  

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0Hi Frank,02br 02br 00Welcome to the forums. 02br 02br 00Today my friends and I 01del 00have02del 00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01b 00in 02b 00Vancouver, Canada. 01font 00Usually with a specific day, use simple past.

  • 0Hi Frank,02br 02br 00Welcome to the forums.
  • 02br 02br 00Today my friends and I 01del 00have02del 00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01b 00in 02b 00Vancouver, Canada.
  • 01font 00Usually with a specific day, use simple past.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00We planned to visit it last week.
  • 01font 00Does this mean you meant to go last week, but something changed your plans?
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0Hi Frank,02br
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00Welcome to the forums. Your main problem seems to be tense.02br
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00Today my friends and I 01del00have02del00 visited Grouse Mountain, 01b00in 02b00Vancouver, Canada. 01font00Usually with a specific day, use simple past. Present perfect is possible, but
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0 Thank you for correcting my writing. Now I think I get more understanding about grammar usage. 0-

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