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Sana Parveen Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

please correct my mail urgent

Dear Sir,
Please allow me 4 days leave as on 12/13/19/20 August.
Request you to kindly approve the same.
  

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Dear Sir, Please allow me four days' leave from December 12 to December 19 of 2020. Thank you, ____________________________ Name

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Dear Sir,

Please allow me four days' leave from December 12 to December 19 of 2020.

Thank you,

____________________________
Name
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Dear Sir,

Please allow me 4 days leave as on 12th Aug/ 13th Aug/19th Aug/20th August.2016

Request you to kindly approve the same.
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No, this version is not better. You have left the apostrophe (which is important) off the word "days." It should be -- days'. Additionally, it is overly complicated to mention each day by the date, when it is perfectly clear the other way. Lastly, the final sentence doesn't sound natural, and it is unnecessary.
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Please allow me four days leave from August 12th, 13th and 19, 20th, 2016. kindly approve.
thanking you....

in my view... No need to say... "Request you to kindly"
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Rahul Roy 3395 Please allow me four days leave from August 12th, 13th and 19, 20th, 2016. kindly approve.thanking you....in my view... No need to say... "Request you to kindly"
Incorrect.

Please allow me four days' leave from the 12th to the 16th of August 2016.
Thank you.
Rahul Roy 3395in my view... No need to say... "Re
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