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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct my mail..

Hi experts,

I'm new to this forum, i need to write one mail to my boss that i'm requesting leave as per the others leave plan so please correct me if any modifications.

Dear sir,
My leave is approved on cinditional base as discused with my manager that time he advised me to co-ordinate with her and take leave according to her leave plan as discussed with her yesterday she agreed to come on this weekend and resume her duty before i start here so now i started my process this is the reason i couldn't send you before because if any chances are made in her plan i should change my plan.

Thanks & Regards
Ganesh N
  

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Dear Mr [surname], My leave has been approved on a conditional basis as discussed with my manage r. He advised me to coordinate with Ms [surname] and take my leave according to her leave plan . As d iscussed with her yesterday, she agreed to resume her duties this weekend before I start her e.

  • Dear Mr [surname], My leave has been approved on a conditional basis as discussed with my manage r.
  • He advised me to coordinate with Ms [surname] and take my leave according to her leave plan .
  • As d iscussed with her yesterday, she agreed to resume her duties this weekend before I start her e.
  • This is the reason I couldn't advise you before: if any changes were made in her plans, I would have had to change my plans.
  • Thank you for your understanding.
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Dear Mr [surname],

My leave has been approved on a conditional basis as discussed with my manager. He advised me to coordinate with Ms [surname] and take my leave according to her leave plan. As discussed with her yesterday, she agreed to resume her duties this weekend before I start here. This is

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