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Please correct my letter to my new employer

1b00I am drafting a letter to my new employer to clarify the clauses in the contract. Please correct if I have made any mistakes in the letter. 02b02br
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00I am writing to confirm in receipt from you an offer of employment letter, a template of reference form and a contract of employment which were sent to me on the 2501sup00th02sup00 April 2008. I am pleased to receive an offer from ABC plc one week prior the start date of the job, this allow me to make the necessary arrangement with my school and current employer.02br
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00I have reviewed the received documents and would like to enquire a few queries as follow: -02br
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    00In the offer of employment letter, should my commencement date of working be on 201sup00nd02sup00 May 2008 instead of 201sup00nd02sup00 April 2008?02br
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    00Please advise the requirement for the reference form. Am I responsible to request a reference from 2 of my previous employers and require them to return the forms directly to the ABC plc's England registered office in Surrey? I am concerned that the process might take longer than one week and as a result this might have an affect on my commencement date of employment which is stated on the contract as 201sup00nd02sup00 May 2008.02br
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    00In the contract of employment clause 1 and 2, should my commencement of employment date be on the 201sup00nd02sup00 May 2008 instead of 2501sup00th02sup00 April 2008?02br
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    00In the contract of employment clause 16.a.iii, it stated that whether during or outside office hours, I shall not be allowed to engage in other work without ABC plc's written permission. Does this clause apply to me as a part time Book Keeper? As a matter of needful, I am considering to continue working with my present job in weekends. Could you provide me an written permission to enable me to work for another job outside office hours?02br
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    00Statutory or company's maternity leave scheme is not covered in the contract of employment, please advise.02br
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    00Am I eligible for any other company's benefit schemes apart from the mentioned company pension scheme in the contract of employment, which I can join after three months from my commencement date of employment? 02br
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    00Could I have a copy of the original signed contract of employment before or on the commencement date of work?02br
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    00Thank you for your time for the interviews and I would be grateful if you could advise me the above. In the meantime, should you have any queries please contact me on my mobile 0123456789.02br
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    00Best regards,02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 11b 10I am drafting a letter to my new employer to clarify the clauses in the contract. Please correct if I have made any mistakes in the letter. 12b 12br 12br 10Dear Sir10,12br 12br 10I am writing to confirm 11del 10in receipt from you12del 10 11b 10receipt of 12b 10an offer of employment letter, a template of reference form and a contract of employment which were sent to me on the 2511sup 10th12sup 10 April 2008.

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  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Anonymous12cite 11b 10I am drafting a letter to my new employer to clarify the clauses in the contract.
  • Please correct if I have made any mistakes in the letter.
  • 12b 12br 12br 10Dear Sir10,12br 12br 10I am writing to confirm 11del 10in receipt from you12del 10 11b 10receipt of 12b 10an offer of employment letter, a template of reference form and a contract of employment which were sent to me on the 2511sup 10th12sup 10 April 2008.
  • 12br 12br 12li 11li 12br 10Please advise the requirement for the reference form.
  • Am I responsible 11del 10to request12del 10 a reference from 211b 10 for requesting references from two 12b 10 of my previous employers11b 10,12b 10 11del 10and require them12del 10 11b 10they 12b 10to return the forms directly to the ABC plc's11del 10 England12del 10 registered office in Surrey?
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01cite10Anonymous12cite11b10I am drafting a letter to my new employer to clarify the clauses in the contract. Please correct if I have made any mistakes in the letter. 12b12br
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