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Brentlopez001 Posted 13 years ago
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Please correct my letter. thanks!

I would like to request for your approval to grant me a loan in the amount of USD10,000 to be settled by deducting USD 1000 per month. I am planning to purchase a car and my money is not enough to cover the full payment. This would be a big help for me and my work as well.

Your kind consideration is highly appreciated.
  

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Dear Mr [surname], I would like to request a staff loan of US$ 10,000 for the purchase of an automobile, to be settled by deducting $1000 per month for 10 months from my salary. This would be a big help for me and for my work as well. I would be grateful for your kind consideration of my request.

  • Dear Mr [surname], I would like to request a staff loan of US$ 10,000 for the purchase of an automobile, to be settled by deducting $1000 per month for 10 months from my salary.
  • This would be a big help for me and for my work as well.
  • I would be grateful for your kind consideration of my request.
  • Sincerely yours,
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Dear Mr [surname],

I would like to request a staff loan of US$ 10,000 for the purchase of an automobile, to be settled by deducting $1000 per month for 10 months from my salary.

This would be a big help for me and for my work as well. I would be grateful for your kind consideration of my request.

Sincerely yours,
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Thank you Sir for the quick reply!.

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