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Simpleibr Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct my letter. Thank you! Request Live Stream

Dear All, (Principal & QC)


As per the instruction given by the Department Head, we would like to request to have a live streaming school broadcast in the TV Monitor (here) or which located in the reception/Admin area, as the other School (####name of school) had started already.


We hope to see an immediate action in this matter.

  

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I do not understand your letter. I will try my best to fix it, but it might not say what you intend. ) be broadcast live (Live means at the same time the meeting is being held) to the TV monitor in the reception area.

  • I do not understand your letter.
  • I will try my best to fix it, but it might not say what you intend.
  • ) be broadcast live (Live means at the same time the meeting is being held) to the TV monitor in the reception area.
  • This has already been arranged for Pelican High School , (name of the other school) and we would like the same for our school.
  • We hope to see an immediate action in this matter, so that we can view the next meeting on September 22 at 10:00 am.
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I do not understand your letter.

I will try my best to fix it, but it might not say what you intend.


Dear All, (Principal & QC)

The department head asked us to request that the Parent/ Teachers association meeting (What is the subject of the live broadcast?) be broadcast live (Live means at the same time the meeting is being held) to the TV monitor i

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