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Jastrone Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct my letter of request to live out. I am not sure if my grammar is correct. thanks a lot

Dear Sir,

I would like to ask in your good office to allow me to have a live-out status. I am now serving more than 2 years to our successful company. With the work and effort I have shown to our company, I hope you will grant my humble request especially I also belong to Grade-7. I will be very grateful if you grant my request. I am hoping for your kind and willful approval regarding this request.

Thank you very much for your kind and consideration.

Sincerely Yours,

Jastone
  

Top answer

Hi, This style of writng would not be good in Canada, but it's probably great for where you live. So, you really shouldn't change much. Here are a few suggestions.

  • Hi, This style of writng would not be good in Canada, but it's probably great for where you live.
  • So, you really shouldn't change much.
  • Here are a few suggestions.
  • Dear Sir, I would like to ask in your good office to allow me to have a live-out status.
  • I have now served more than 2 years in our successful company.
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Hi,

This style of writng would not be good in Canada, but it's probably great for where you live. So, you really shouldn't change much. Here are a few suggestions.

Dear Sir,

I would like to ask in your good office to allow me to have a live-out status. I have now served more than 2 years in our successful company. With the work and effort I have shown to
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thanks clive for your help
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Request to please for your kind consideration & positive reply.

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