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Chthon Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Please correct my Letter of Motivation and give me some Hints
Hi, I need some help with my Letter. Thanks
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation.
I am a student at the (...) and I will finish my study of economics in December 2005 with the Diploma. My majors are Controlling and Production management and my Diploma thesis is: The Vendor managed Inventory as coordination instrument in the Supply Chain.
During the time I where Employee of summer youth camps I learned the values of teamwork and commitment. I am also very familiar with a variety of Computer Software, including Microsoft Word, Excel, Access and Latex.
Before the work experience I will Increase my English Skills with a Language course to avoid Language barriers.
I am very keen to apply my theoretical skills in practical work especially in my study majors Controlling and Production management and learn more about the Australian country and their people.
I enclose a Curriculum vitae and a Survey of performances I have done during my main study.
Yours faithfully
Signature
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation.
I am a student at the (...) and I will finish my study of economics in December 2005 with the Diploma. My majors are Controlling and Production management and my Diploma thesis is: The Vendor managed Inventory as coordination instrument in the Supply Chain.
During the time I where Employee of summer youth camps I learned the values of teamwork and commitment. I am also very familiar with a variety of Computer Software, including Microsoft Word, Excel, Access and Latex.
Before the work experience I will Increase my English Skills with a Language course to avoid Language barriers.
I am very keen to apply my theoretical skills in practical work especially in my study majors Controlling and Production management and learn more about the Australian country and their people.
I enclose a Curriculum vitae and a Survey of performances I have done during my main study.
Yours faithfully
Signature
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) This letter is pretty good with just a few little error marked here in blue. Dear Sir or Madam, (It would be much better to find their name) I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation. ) and I will finish my study of economics in December 2005 with the Diploma.
- ) This letter is pretty good with just a few little error marked here in blue.
- Dear Sir or Madam, (It would be much better to find their name) I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation.
- ) and I will finish my study of economics in December 2005 with the Diploma.
- >> I have some previous work experience as I worked at a summer youth camp for X years, and this taught me the value of teamwork and commitment.
- ) Before I start my work experience I intend to improve my English s kills by taking a language course.
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Hi Chthon (are you a Piers Anthony fan then?)
This letter is pretty good with just a few little error marked here in blue.
Dear Sir or Madam, (It would be much better to find their name)
I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation.
I am a student at the (...) and I will finish
This letter is pretty good with just a few little error marked here in blue.
Dear Sir or Madam, (It would be much better to find their name)
I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within your organisation.
I am a student at the (...) and I will finish
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Thank you, this helps me a lot.
I wouldn't say I'm a Anthony Piers Fan but I was reading the book when I first entered the Internet and needed a Nickname.
I wouldn't say I'm a Anthony Piers Fan but I was reading the book when I first entered the Internet and needed a Nickname.
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