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Mcbian Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
PLEASE CORRECT MY LETTER
Date: 10-02-2011
To: Office .
From: Branch (XXX)
Subject: REQUEST FOR APPROVAL OF RISE IN SWEEPER’S SALARY
Dear Sir,
It is humbly submitted that Mr. Dileep –Sweeper S/o Kaloo has been working for the last 6 years with us, and he is getting salary of Rs. 300.00/= per month in this connection, he has given us a request in writing to rise in salary.
We strongly recommend you to rise sweeper salary from Rs. 300.00/= to Rs. 3000.00/= per month, because his salary is not commensurate with his work.
Your kind approval will highly be eternally thanked.
Request application is attached for ready reference:
Branch Manager,
To: Office .
From: Branch (XXX)
Subject: REQUEST FOR APPROVAL OF RISE IN SWEEPER’S SALARY
Dear Sir,
It is humbly submitted that Mr. Dileep –Sweeper S/o Kaloo has been working for the last 6 years with us, and he is getting salary of Rs. 300.00/= per month in this connection, he has given us a request in writing to rise in salary.
We strongly recommend you to rise sweeper salary from Rs. 300.00/= to Rs. 3000.00/= per month, because his salary is not commensurate with his work.
Your kind approval will highly be eternally thanked.
Request application is attached for ready reference:
Branch Manager,
Top answer
Try this: Dear Sir, We recognize that Mr. Dileep Sweeper Kaloo has been working with us now for over six years and his work performance has proven him to be worth more than what we are currently paying him. We are strongly encouraging his current salary of Rs.
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Try this:
Dear Sir,
We recognize that Mr. Dileep Sweeper Kaloo has been working with us now for over six years and his work performance has proven him to be worth more than what we are currently paying him.
We are strongly encouraging his current salary of Rs. 300.00/Month to be increased to Rs. 3000.00/Month.
Your kind approval will be appreciated.
Dear Sir,
We recognize that Mr. Dileep Sweeper Kaloo has been working with us now for over six years and his work performance has proven him to be worth more than what we are currently paying him.
We are strongly encouraging his current salary of Rs. 300.00/Month to be increased to Rs. 3000.00/Month.
Your kind approval will be appreciated.
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