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RJD Posted 19 years ago
As per our client request, we checked the above noted item and have found the bulb is not functioning.
We have checked it with the local supplier and also in the market, but it is not available.So please arrange the above said item with overseas supplier at the earliest as the client is getting very impatient and calling frequently, and find below the detail of above said item.
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As per our client request, we checked the above noted item and have found the bulb is not functioning.
We have checked it with the local supplier and also in the market, but it is not available.So please arrange the above said item with overseas supplier at the earliest as the client is getting very impatient and calling frequently, and find below the detail of above said item.
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RJD As per our client request As requested by our client, we checked the above cited item and have found the bulb is not functioning. We have checked it with the local supplier and also in the market, but it [ It is not clear if it is the faulty item or the bulb that you have looked for] is not available. So please Please arrange with your the above said item with overseas supplier for a replacement to be sent as soon as possible at the earliest as the client is getting very impatient and calling frequently .
- RJD As per our client request As requested by our client, we checked the above cited item and have found the bulb is not functioning.
- We have checked it with the local supplier and also in the market, but it [ It is not clear if it is the faulty item or the bulb that you have looked for] is not available.
- So please Please arrange with your the above said item with overseas supplier for a replacement to be sent as soon as possible at the earliest as the client is getting very impatient and calling frequently .
- and find below the detail of above said item.
- The details of the required item are as follows: ...
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RJDAs per our client requestAs requested by our client, we checked the above cited item and have found the bulb is not functioning.
We have checkeditwith the local supplier and also in the market, but it [It
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Recommendation:
.....the bulb is malfunction.
....The details of the required items are shown as below:
.....the bulb is malfunction.
....The details of the required items are shown as below:
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Sorry, Ben, but your first suggestion is bad grammar. Your second suggestion is OK, but shows no advantage over 'are as follows'.
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