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Hoang Huy 94 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct my introduce in writing task 2. Thank you so much

1. Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

=> In recent decades, there has been a growing trend towards leading in an organisation by older people for a variety of purposes. Although elderly people have a myriad of experience, young generations should be encouraged to be a leader.


2. In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

=> In recent decades, there has been a growing trend towards wearing Western clothes such as suits and jeans for a variety of reasons. Although this trend might be of great concern to some traditional people, it brings more positive changes overall.


3. Not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?

=> In recent decades, using bicycle has been receiving endless pucblic attention around the world thanks to environment. Given that a few people use this transport, identifying the reasons behind it is key to finding the solutions

  
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