Please correct my IELTS Writing Task 1

passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The column graph illustrates the proportion of passing driver testers among men and women from 1980 to 2010 in an Asian country. In general, the rate of women driver passing was higher than that of men during the 30-year period.

As can be seen from the graph, the percentage of women who got their driving test passed (roughly 70%) was highest in 2000 while men passing driving tests in 2000 (almost 50%) was nearly as high as 2010. The proportion of driving tests passed by women (just under 50%) was approximately twice as high as that by men, which accounted for nearly 30%).

Turning to the overall of two types of column which is separated by gender, during the 1980-2010 period, there was an upward trend in the rate of women passing driving tests from just under 50% to over 60%. During this time period, the proportion of men who had the driving test passed increased dramatically from just under 30% to almost 50%.

Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.