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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories with different proportions among residents in the UK.
The bar chart show the money allocated to three categories with different percentage among citizens in the UK by the year 2004.
Overall, the spending on food and drink, and entertainment seemed to be the highest for people aged from 30 to 75+. However, the budged allocated to restaurant and hotel was by far the highest in people whose ages under 30.
Looking first at people in the group 75+, the expenditure of inhabitants in food and drink was approximately 22% which was about doubled in entertainment and was three times higher than restaurant and hotel. It was also true for people whose ages are 60-75, but the allocated for food and drink was 20% and entertainment was about 3% higher. For those in group 45-60, it had a similar trend but the gap between restaurant/hotel and entertainment reduce significantly, around 12% and 14%.
With regard to people in the group 30-45, the expenditure on food and drink was by far the highest with around 13%. However, the two other categories was just approximately a tenth. For the youngest bracket, residents’ spending in restaurant and hotel was about 14% while food/drink and entertainment was about halved.
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<span;>The provided bar graph compares the outlay of five different age groups of UK residents on three classifications in the year 2004. Overall, we can see that as getting aged spending priority of people differed. The under 30 age group spent more money on restaurant and hotel. However, the 76 plus age group spent more on food and drink. According to the chart, there was an upward tre
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