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Jazzzy Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct my grammatical errors.

I watched last movie in the month of March and name of this movie is "AIRLIFT" this is a real story . I will write this story in many parts so that you can correct my grammar easily.

PART 1

A man of Indian origin named Ranjeet lives in Kuwait. he was big shot in Kuwait.he had a good relations with richest man of Kuwait .he was spending luxurious life in Kuwait. one day around 3:00 pm he was sleeping one of his friend called him and said Iran has attacked upon Kuwait and government of Kuwait has fled away.he replied in a normal way this is not a happen once upon a time.it keeps on happening in Kuwait on regular basis.

  

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I edited your mistakes and I've also changed some of your sentences by adding some words or something because I think it's better to be said this way: A man of Indian origin lives in Kuwait. he was a big shot there and had a good relationship with the richest person in kuwait. no wonder he was living a luxurious life.

  • I edited your mistakes and I've also changed some of your sentences by adding some words or something because I think it's better to be said this way: A man of Indian origin lives in Kuwait.
  • he was a big shot there and had a good relationship with the richest person in kuwait.
  • no wonder he was living a luxurious life.
  • one day, a friend of him called when he was sleeping.
  • the friend said that Iran has attacked Kuwait and the government has fled the country.
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I edited your mistakes and I've also changed some of your sentences by adding some words or something because I think it's better to be said this way:

A man of Indian origin lives in Kuwait. he was a big shot there and had a good relationship with the richest person in kuwait. no wonder he was living a luxurious life. one day, a friend of him called when he was sleeping. the friend said

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