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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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please correct my gramma...thank you very much.

When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food.

These yummy food including chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookie…etc.

For my healthy, mother always did not allow me eating much jungle food ,

I always ate them secretly . Therefore I was a chubby .

Once time I had a toothache ,I remembered that I cried loudly and threw anything near my side .

Mother scolded me but took me to see the dentist.

He pull one of my teeth out and saved me from the pain.

From this experience, I did not eat yummy food too much ,

and always remembered to brush my teeth after eating.
  

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When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food. cookies…etc. For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food So I always ate them secretly.

  • When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food.
  • cookies…etc.
  • For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food So I always ate them secretly.
  • Therefore I was chubby.
  • One time I had a toothache - I remember that I cried loudly and threw anything that was nearby.
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When I was a little girl I always liked yummy food.

These yummy foods included chocolate?ice cream?candy?cookies…etc.

For my health, mother never allowed me to eat much junk food

So I always ate them secretly. Therefore I was chubby.

One time I had a toothache - I remember that I cried loudly and threw anything that was nearby.

Mother scolded me but to

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