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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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We are sorry to advise you that, due to some bad material and awaiting replacement from supplier, we cannot keep our commitment to ship 21640pcs outstanding cargo of EC1234 before CNY holidays. But there are 7212pcs cargo with PO HEED284612 inspected cargo which is ready for ship. 7428pcs cargo was booked the inspection on January 31, there is also included 3428pcs remaining cargo for December’s order (PO HDEE12469). The rest 7000pcs have also booked the inspection on February 02 and planned to ship on February 04.
  

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Please remember to separate the units from the quantities, like this: 2400 pcs (not 2400pcs) We are sorry to advise you that because of some defective material and a consequent delay for replacement from the supplier, we cannot keep our commitment to ship 21640 pcs of outstanding cargo for EC1234 before the CNY holidays. However, there are 7212 pcs of inspected cargo which are ready to ship with PO HEED284612. Also, 7428 pcs of cargo were booked for inspection on January 31, and 3428 pcs of remaining cargo for December’s order (PO HDEE12469) are included.

  • Please remember to separate the units from the quantities, like this: 2400 pcs (not 2400pcs) We are sorry to advise you that because of some defective material and a consequent delay for replacement from the supplier, we cannot keep our commitment to ship 21640 pcs of outstanding cargo for EC1234 before the CNY holidays.
  • However, there are 7212 pcs of inspected cargo which are ready to ship with PO HEED284612.
  • Also, 7428 pcs of cargo were booked for inspection on January 31, and 3428 pcs of remaining cargo for December’s order (PO HDEE12469) are included.
  • The other 7000 pcs have been booked for inspection on February 2 and are planned for shipment on February 4.
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Please remember to separate the units from the quantities, like this: 2400 pcs (not 2400pcs)

We are sorry to advise you that because of some defective material and a consequent delay for replacement from the supplier, we cannot keep our commitment to ship 21640 pcs of outstanding cargo for EC1234 before the CNY

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