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Ice2007 Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct my grammar, thanks
We have arranged the surveyor for these goods inspection on November 07. After that, they will submit us a certificate which is certify that these goods can be return to China. The certificate will be sent you as soon as possible. The charge of this arrangement is USD240.00, we will deduct it from your next payment. Please advise when will you pick up these goods return to your factory for reworking?
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We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November). After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal. You could say, "Following this inspection, they will submit a certificate to us which will certify that these goods can be returned to China.
- We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November).
- After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal.
- You could say, "Following this inspection, they will submit a certificate to us which will certify that these goods can be returned to China.
- This certificate will be sent/forwarded ("forwarded" is more in keeping with the formal tone of the letter) to you as soon as possible.
- The charge for this is USD240, which we will deduct (which will be deducted) from your next payment.
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We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November).
After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal. You could say, "Following this inspection, they will submit a certificate to us which will certify that these goods can be returned to China. This cer
After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal. You could say, "Following this inspection, they will submit a certificate to us which will certify that these goods can be returned to China. This cer
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Ice2007We have arranged with the surveyor for these goods to be inspected on November 07. After that, they will submitusa certificate which is to certify that these goods can be returned to China. The certifica
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