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Meidiana Posted 11 years ago
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Please correct my grammar please. Thank you :)

The movie that has influenced my thinking the most is ‘Miracle in Cell no. 7’. It’s a Korean Drama. It is the saddest story that I’ve ever watched. The story is about a sweet little daughter and a mentally challenged father. In short, the father falsely accused of murder and bring him to the cell. Then his daughter infiltrated to the jail because she wanted to live with her father. The story began more interesting during his time in prison. A lot of interesting occurrence happened. Long story short, the father has forced to confess about the murder and executed. The movie really take my tears and make me cry a lot.
  

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Here is how I would word it (changes in bold and cross-out): The movie that has influenced my thinking the most is " Miracle in Cell No . " It’s a Korean drama . It is the saddest story that I’ve ever watched.

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  • Here is how I would word it (changes in bold and cross-out): The movie that has influenced my thinking the most is " Miracle in Cell No .
  • " It’s a Korean drama .
  • It is the saddest story that I’ve ever watched.
  • The story is about a sweet little daughter and a mentally challenged father.
  • In brief short, the father was falsely accused of murder and placed in Cell No.
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Here is how I would word it (changes in bold and cross-out):

The movie that has influenced my thinking the most is "Miracle in Cell No. 7." It’s a Korean drama. It is the saddest story that I’ve ever watched. The story is about a sweet little daughter and a mentally challenged father. In brief short, the father was falsely accuse
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