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Isydsmile Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
please correct my grammar
**It’s good to hear that you are doing well! Last time when we met I figured that you are tired. I’m sure that not able to go home after each work day itself would be very tiring. (I'm trying to say be out on the business trip all the time would be very tiring...) If you let me know your schedule in advance, I should be able to work around your schedule. **
My grammar is pretty bad. Please help me with above e-mail! thank you in advance!
My grammar is pretty bad. Please help me with above e-mail! thank you in advance!
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Hi, It's not so bad. In the second sentence, you need "were tired" instead of "are tired". In the third sentence you need "not being able to go home" instead of "not able to go home".
- Hi, It's not so bad.
- In the second sentence, you need "were tired" instead of "are tired".
- In the third sentence you need "not being able to go home" instead of "not able to go home".
- In the last sentence you should possibly say "accommodate your schedule" instead of "work around your schedule", but what you have is correct grammar.
- Good luck, Pete
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Hi,
It's not so bad. In the second sentence, you need "were tired" instead of "are tired". In the third sentence you need "not being able to go home" instead of "not able to go home". In the last sentence you should possibly say "accommodate your schedule" instead of "work around your schedule", but what you have is correct grammar.
Good luck,
Pete
It's not so bad. In the second sentence, you need "were tired" instead of "are tired". In the third sentence you need "not being able to go home" instead of "not able to go home". In the last sentence you should possibly say "accommodate your schedule" instead of "work around your schedule", but what you have is correct grammar.
Good luck,
Pete
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