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Although I don't know personally what your problem is, and how diffucult is this to burden, still, it must not the way you should show them. Criticizm isn't bad at all for sometimes you need it to see something you never mind. And if you, yourself, know that you are in the right tract and you are in the right standard of life, then you have your right to deny it but never hate them in your heart. My friend once said to me, "They might hate you because of your standard but they respect you, be strong yet tender in heart." You know what I mean, when you need Him never hesitate to call Him for He is the Author of everything. Perhaps He is just using His rod(pain) to bring you back in the right tract because maybe you've been leading astray. Never set your focus on their words but try to learn how to rightly handle it. I know that I'm not that kind of a perfect person to say it but I'm just attempting to share this good advice for it is no longer of any use to myself.

I'm just trying to practice myself improving english... I'd like to see my error in grammar, usage and etc. please help me out... Thanks in advance

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

I have deleted some redundant words and underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised version:

Although I don't know ~~personall~~y what your problem is, and how diffucult is this to burden, still, it must not the way you should show them. Criticizm isn't bad at all for sometimes you need it to see something you never mind. And if you~~, yourself,~~ know that you are in the right tract and you are in the right standard of life, then you have your right to deny it but never hate them in your heart. My friend once said to me, "They might hate you because of your standard but they respect you, be strong yet tender ~~in heart~~." ~~You know what I mean,~~ when you need Him never hesitate to call Him for He is the Author of everything. Perhaps He is just using His rod(pain) to bring you back in the right tract because maybe you've been leading astray. Never set your focus on their words but try to learn how to rightly handle it. I know that I'm not ~~that kind of~~ a perfect person to say it but I'm just attempting to share this good advice for it is no longer of any use to myself (!??).

(If you are just practicing writing, then it would be better to avoid controversial topics like religion.)

Aerohn · Answer

Although I don't know what your problem is, and how weighty this burden is, still, it must not the approach you should show them. Criticism isn't bad in some other way, sometimes you need it to see something you had disregarded. And if you know that you are on the right track and you are on the right standard of life, then you have your right to deny it but never hate them in your heart. My friend once said to me, "They might hate you because of your standard but they respect you. Be strong yet tender". When you need Him, never hesitate to call Him for He is the Author of everything. Perhaps He is just using His rod(pain) to bring you back on thr right track because maybe you've been led astray. Never set your attention on their words but try to learn how to rightly handle it. I know that I'm not a perfect person to say this, but I'm just attempting to share this good advice, because it is never of any use to myself.

Thanks for checking this out.

Aerohn · Answer

Mister Micawber

How about this one?

Mister Micawber · Answer

Have patience.  Some of us have jobs.  I have a day full of paying students.

Mister Micawber · Answer

Although I don't know what your problem is or how heavy this burden is, it must not be the approach you show them. Criticism isn't all bad; sometimes you need it to see something you have disregarded. And if you know that you are on the right track and have the right standards, then you have the right to ignore it. But never hate them. My friend once said to me, "They might hate you because of your standards, but they respect you. Be strong yet tender." When you need Him, never hesitate to call Him, for He is the Author of everything. Perhaps He is just using His rod to bring you back onto the right track, because maybe you've been led astray. Never set your attention on their words, but try to learn how to rightly handle them. I know that I'm not the best person to say this, but I'm attempting to share this good advice, even if I don't use it myself.

Aerohn · Answer

I'm sorry, I'm willing to wait

even if I don't use it myself.

What I mean here in the last phrase is I have already used that certain advice, and all I want to do is to pass it on.

"It is no longer of use to myself" Is this correct? I really appreciate your effort...

Mister Micawber · Answer

Something like this rather:

I know that I'm not the best person to say this, but I'm attempting to share this good advice, because I have used it myself.

Anonymous · Answer

Please, can i get some help on correcting this one?

The news that I am going to present is about North Korea preparation for a rocket launch. I found this news on CNN`s website on Tuesday the 10 April, which was yesterday. The headline of the news is “North Korea says rocket is nearly ready”. The news is about the North Korean preparation for a rocket launch. Last month Ryu *** a military leader in Pyongyang in North Korea, announced that it would be launched a rocket carrying a satellite between 12 and 16 of April. The propose of the rocket launch is to mark the 100th anniversary of North Korea`s former leader Kim Li-sung. The regime in North Korea also claims that the rocket is going to be used to launch a satellite into space. On Tuesday, which was yesterday, a talisman from the regime in North Korea said that they aspect to be finish with the last preparation for the rocket launch during Wednesday or Thursday. According to North Korea the rocket will be used to estimate agricultural corps and collect weather data, and it will also be used in several other civilian purposes. Since North Korea claims the rocket is peaceful, the international community cannot refuse North Korea to launch the rocket. However, Japan, South Korea and the United States see the rocket launch as a cover for a long-rage ballistic missile test. Therefore, both japan and South Korea have warned North Korea that they will shoot down the rocket if it comes within their territories. As a result of the treat from Japan and South Korea, North Korea did not stop the preparation on the rocket launch. They on the other hand warned that it the rocket gets shoot down they will respond with merciless and immediate revenge. So, the state of the case is now that North Korea are still preparing the rocket launch, and the international community is waiting to see if they are going to launch the satellite or not. My personal opinion on the matter is that I do not think that the North Korean authorities should continue the preparation for the rocket launch this because the international community does not think the rocket is for civilian purposes. Because of the speculation on what the purposes of the satellite are, it has caused a lot of anxiety for the people in nearby countries to North Korea.

Mister Micawber · Answer

You are repeating much too much.

The news that I am going to present is about North Korea preparation for a rocket launch. I found this news on CNN`s website on Tuesday the 10 April, which was yesterday. The headline ~~of the news~~ is “North Korea says rocket is nearly ready”. ~~The news is about the North Korean preparation for a rocket launch~~. Last month Ryu Kum a military leader in Pyongyang ~~in North Korea~~, announced that it would be launched a rocket carrying a satellite between 12 and 16 of April. The propose of the ~~rocket~~ launch is to mark the 100th anniversary of North Korea`s former leader Kim Li-sung's birth. ~~The regime in North Korea also claims that the rocket is going to be used to launch a satellite into space.~~ On Tuesday~~, which was yesterday,~~ a talisman ~~from t~~he regime in North Korea said that they aspect to be finish with the ~~last~~ preparations ~~for the rocket launch~~ during Wednesday or Thursday. According to North Korea the rocket will be used to estimate agricultural corps and collect weather data, and it will also be used in several other civilian purposes. Since North Korea claims the rocket is peaceful, the international community cannot refuse ~~North Korea to launch the rocket~~. However, Japan, South Korea and the United States see ~~the rocket launch~~ it as a cover for a long-rage ballistic missile test. Therefore, both japan and South Korea have warned North Korea that they will shoot down the rocket if it comes within their territories. As a result of the treat from Japan and South Korea, North Korea did not stop the preparations ~~on the rocket launch~~. They on the other hand warned that it the rocket gets shoot down they will respond with merciless and immediate revenge. So, ~~the state of the case is now that~~ North Korea are still preparing the ~~rocket~~ launch, and the international community is waiting to see ~~if they are going to launch the satellite or not~~. ~~My personal opinion on the matter is that~~ I do not think that the North Korean authorities should continue ~~the preparation for the rocket launch~~ this because the international community does not think the rocket is for civilian purposes. ~~Because of~~ the speculation ~~on what the purposes of the satellite are, it~~ has caused a lot of anxiety for the people in nearby countries ~~to North Korea~~.

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