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0 Wonder ask me to explain you more details regarding the ICTI certificate, because Rebecca is concern that the certificate cannot be updated as the shipment date is in July 25 for PO xxx. They can use the existing certificate, it expires 31 July 2008. 02br
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00The next factory audit will be conducted in coming July, and the certificate will be issued in August with 12 months validity (Aug 08 to July 09). We will try to push the factory provide this to us in earlier in order to make your customer to feel relieved. Is this explanation ok for you? Please advise us if you need any further details.0-
  

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1font 00Wonder ask me to explain you more details regarding the ICTI certificate,02font 02br 02br 00I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say here. " 02br 02br 01font 00because Rebecca is concern01b 00ed02b 00 that the certificate cannot be updated as the shipment date is in July 25 for PO ***. 02font 02br 02br 00Do you really mean that she's concerned the certificate cannot be updated?

  • 1font 00Wonder ask me to explain you more details regarding the ICTI certificate,02font 02br 02br 00I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say here.
  • " 02br 02br 01font 00because Rebecca is concern01b 00ed02b 00 that the certificate cannot be updated as the shipment date is in July 25 for PO ***.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Do you really mean that she's concerned the certificate cannot be updated?
  • From the context it seems more likely to me that she's concerned the existing certificate won't be valid for the upcoming shipment.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00They can use the existing certificate, 01del 00it02del 00 01b 00which02b 00 expires 31 July 2008.
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1font00Wonder ask me to explain you more details regarding the ICTI certificate,02font02br
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00I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to say here. All I can think of is that "Wonder" is supposed to be "Wanda" (someone's first name), in which case it should be something like "Wanda asked me to give you more details regarding the IC
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0 Sorry, missed a correction in the reply I just sent:02br
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01font00... as the shipment date is 01del00in02del00 July 25 ...02font0-

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