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00 Many people think that cosmetic surgery does only harms to people. However, this saying is not always true. To a certain extent, we have a right to settle many our own affairs.02br
00 First of all, some people think that doing cosmetic surgery, which is violating the nature. For instance, your baby must not to change his face even you have changed your face very handsome. Moreover, it might have serious potential after-effects. It is a chance that the change is not you expect, after cosmetic surgery, even change worse. Furthermore, to a certain extent, cosmetic surgery is very expensive and you should rest a long time after finish cosmetic surgery, so it might waste you a lot of money and times. In addition, most advertisements are not always true and even boast. Probably, some people are cheated easily by these not true advertisements and that there is no guarantee in the law.02br
00 However, cutting hair, drying hair, eye surgery, using cosmetics and gel, abortion, contraception also is violating the nature. Originally, many people oppose above activities, but now, most people gradually accept these even they always do these. Besides, every people have a right to choose their choice. Let us see from another angle, doing cosmetic surgery, which may be positive action because they have a requirement of them, they try to improve themselves. In addition, after doing cosmetic surgery, probably some people have a discrimination to see you. You should have enormous courage before making this decision, which proves that you are brave.02br
00 From the nature point of view, I do not agree doing cosmetic surgery and it has serious risks. On the other hand, I even admire them because they might have much courage to do it and admit it. Generally speaking, I dare not do it and I do not have courage do it even if someone sponsors me to do this.0-