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Stellayau Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my gammar, thanks !

In reference to our telephone conversation this morning, noted that the production for PD6810 and RP1103 is slow down due to the CD rom shortage. Please kindly chasing the cargo delivery from your supplier and keep our schedule on time.
  

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Try this - I'm not sure if this is what you meant by chasing the cargo? In our telephone conversation this morning, it was noted that the production for PD6810 and RP1103 [lots? orders?

  • Try this - I'm not sure if this is what you meant by chasing the cargo?
  • In our telephone conversation this morning, it was noted that the production for PD6810 and RP1103 [lots?
  • orders?
  • ] has been delayed due to the CD rom shortage.
  • Please [??
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Try this - I'm not sure if this is what you meant by chasing the cargo?

In our telephone conversation this morning, it was noted that the production for PD6810 and RP1103 [lots? orders? shipments?] has been delayed due to the CD rom shortage. Please [?? follow up with ??]your supplier to keep the agreed-upon schedule.
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That's my meaning. Thank you !
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Grammar GeekTry this - I'm not sure if this is what you meant by chasing the cargo?

In our telephone conversation this morning, it was noted that the production for PD6810 and RP1103 [lots? orders? shipments?] has been delayed due to the CD rom shortage. Please [?? follow up with ??]your supplier to keep the agreed-upon schedule.

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