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Please correct my essay thx..
Hours before the new years of 2004, I've decided to head out to celebrate with a friend. The weather was cold, the wind mild and strong, but the image of the fireworks were too delightful to miss. I took the train to Boston Common as transportation. Finally reaching there in thirty minutes, we roamed around the streets of Boston Common for quite some time. There were many sites worth seeing beside the fireworks, such as the amazing safari ice sculptures, and the rock n' roll music concert. It felt great to be amongst a community of people showing their spirits in the time of the new years. After some time of watching the gorgeous sites, we ate at a Vietnamese restaurant, the food was delicious. Moments after, we went back to the core of Boston Common to watch the countdown, as the year 2004 only comes around once.
can soem1 help me add more detail... like the thing see in count down, the beauty of safari ice sculptures, the people...
can soem1 help me add more detail... like the thing see in count down, the beauty of safari ice sculptures, the people...
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Boston Calling this quaint and charming city the 'Athens of America' might seem a bit braggadocio, but the city's 19th-century glory radiates through its grand architecture, its population of literati, artists and educators and its world-renowned academic and cultural institutions. [Lonely Planet Guide, Boston] Maybe google some magic into the details * do you know about the magical lighted ice sculptures from Harbin Snow and Ice Festival. Maybe borrow some descriptions from this festival to ‘capture’ the Boston safari * same deal with the fireworks, maybe google it.
- Boston Calling this quaint and charming city the 'Athens of America' might seem a bit braggadocio, but the city's 19th-century glory radiates through its grand architecture, its population of literati, artists and educators and its world-renowned academic and cultural institutions.
- [Lonely Planet Guide, Boston] Maybe google some magic into the details * do you know about the magical lighted ice sculptures from Harbin Snow and Ice Festival.
- Maybe borrow some descriptions from this festival to ‘capture’ the Boston safari * same deal with the fireworks, maybe google it.
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Boston
Calling this quaint and charming city the 'Athens of America' might seem a bit braggadocio, but the city's 19th-century glory radiates through its grand architecture, its population of literati, artists and educators and its world-renowned academic and cultural institutions.
[Lonely Planet Guide, Boston]
Maybe google some magic into the details
* do you know about t
Calling this quaint and charming city the 'Athens of America' might seem a bit braggadocio, but the city's 19th-century glory radiates through its grand architecture, its population of literati, artists and educators and its world-renowned academic and cultural institutions.
[Lonely Planet Guide, Boston]
Maybe google some magic into the details
* do you know about t
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