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Phumba2009 Posted 18 years ago
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PLEASE CORRECT MY ESSAY: THANKS!!!

LANGUAGE LEARNING
Language Learning it's very important for foreigners mostly when the foreigner wants to study at the University or some college.
I think the best opportunity is the opportunity what you give to yourself. And neglecting some of the training you need to reach your goal it's a bad choice. Many people are conffused about many things mostly when the newcomer is alone in a different country where he or her was born. Sometimes newcomers get conffused about what to do in a different life style and difficult situations living abroad. Mostly when nobody cares about your life as usually happens in a different country, because there is not friends maybe not family or not the same circumstances. And all these situations make you lost your goals for a moment. So foreigners tend to forget their important goals and they focuses on the urgent. And all this seems like you are neglecting and sometimes you really are neglecting and wasting time and that is a real danger to your goals.
  

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LANGUAGE LEARNING Language Learning is very important for foreigners mostly when the foreigner wants to study at University or some other college. I think the best opportunity is the opportunity t hat you give to yourself. And neglecting some of the training you need to reach your goal is a bad choice.

  • LANGUAGE LEARNING Language Learning is very important for foreigners mostly when the foreigner wants to study at University or some other college.
  • I think the best opportunity is the opportunity t hat you give to yourself.
  • And neglecting some of the training you need to reach your goal is a bad choice.
  • Many people are conffused about many things, mostly when the newcomer is alone in a different country where he or she was born.
  • Sometimes newcomers get conffused about what to do in different life styles and difficult situations living abroad.
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LANGUAGE LEARNING
Language Learning is very important for foreigners mostly when the foreigner wants to study at University or some other college.
I think the best opportunity is the opportunity that you give to yourself. And neglecting some of the training you need to reach your goal is
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MadhulkMany people are conffused about many things, mostly when the newcomer is alone in a different country where he or she was born. Sometimes newcomers get conffused about what to do in different life styles and difficult situations living abroad
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