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Secret Agent Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

please correct my essay, thanks

Dear miko:

It's been a long time since I left. How have you been? send my best wishs to you family.
I moved lately. The new home is pretty nice, there is a small but beautiful garden near by. i like to walking in it's bloomy flowers, breathe it's sweet air. I'm sure you will like it either. You have no idea how happy i am sine you told me you would come here to visit me at september. There's many of tasty food I want to share with you and interesting place I like to show you! I can't wait! I wish times go fast so i can see you soon!

your sincerely
sara
  

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Send my best wishes to your family. I write this to you Sara don't send it:D

  • Send my best wishes to your family.
  • I write this to you Sara don't send it:D
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Dear Miko,

It has been a long time since I left.I hope you are doing well.I moved my house and my new home is pretty nice.There is a small but beautiful garden near it.I really like walking in the bloomy flowers and breathing its sweet air.I am quite sure you will like it too.You can't guess how happy I am since you told me you would visit me in September.Her
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Dear Miko,

It has been a long time since I left. How have you been? Send my best wishes to your family [typically, we would put this at the end of a letter - at the beginning we would say: I hope your family are all well, or How are your family?]

I moved house recently. My new home is quite nice, and there is a small but lovely garden nearby.
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thank you very much! i'm very appreciate!

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