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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my essay ''Organ Donation''

Dear Sir/Madam,

Here is my essay.

Topic:

Hong Kong has the best organ transplant facilities in the world but,unfortunately,we have a shortage of organs for transplant.Doctors need to look at all the possibilities of making more organs available for patients.Why do people refuse to donate organs?What can be doner to increaser organ donation?

Write a letter to the Editor of the Hong Kong Post to discuss the issue justifying your views with reason and examples.Do not write any address.Sign your letter`Chris Wong'.

Dear Editor,

As a regular reader of your column,l am writing to bring to the public's attention the problem of shortage of organs for transplant.Hong Kong has the best organ transplant facilities in the world but,unfortunately,we have a shortage of organs for transplant.Doctors need to look at all the possibilities of making more organs available for patients.Why did this happen?Let us now analyse a comprehensible investigation for the phenomenon.

To begin with,we should figure out why people refuses to donate organs.

To a large extent,it can be attributed to the traditional civilizations of China and the lack of understanding which people may have an organ donation.People may think that donating the organs will posed a inausipicious sign for their relatives.The slogan swept has been convinced to a reality level that is ''Death should keep the flawless body.Some may even believe that they will become weaker and lossing the ability to work.

As a result of this,the government is required to spread and reinforce the messageBeing sympathic and showing love is what we lack nowadays''.When a parent is dead,his/her family members and friends will be heart-broken and cried bitterly.Life is rather unpredicable and scarce in the world.Despite the fact that the technological progress is being snowball,the perfect assurance still has a dreamily far from possible.

What is being the essence we have to mend is already showed.It is high time to show our prohibitively high value of axiology.The dark cloud and the smelly air will be purified soon.

Let's engage in.

Yours faithfully,

Chris Wong

Chris Wong

L am looking forward to checking your reply in any convenience.

And l will be reassured after you have read.

Thanks for your help.
  

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