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00 00Since participant countries of the six-party talks signed a comprehensive agreement in 2005 September, diplomatic efforts to resolve 010200’00s nuclear stand-still have hardly been seen. At that time, North Korea agreed to halting their nuclear bomb program in return for economic aid, energy aid and security assurance. However, since 010200 launched a nuclear test in last October, the negotiation has nearly come to a rupture.02br
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00 00On this week, negotiators from each country focused on how to set the timetable for abolishing 010200’00s nuclear program, and on how much and when the reclusive nation will receive compensation. Bush administration00’00s officials said that the current proposal demand that North Korea shut down and seal main nuclear facilities in the next couple of months in return for providing fuel oil from South Korea and starting a talk for building a diplomatic tie between North Korea and the United States. 02br
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00 00Nevertheless, the procedure has difficulties due to details on how much aid 010200 accurately demanded. Aleksandr Losyukov, Russian top envoy, said that participant countries did not decide on the amount of final aid, and refused to open the specific amount of money that North Korea requested. 00“00The biggest stumbling block is still economic aid00”00, he added. 02br
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00 00However, a diplomat said that problems are not sole. 00“00Situations are still serious. Gaps among each country for the problem have been narrowed, but a definite resolution have hardly been reached.00”00, Japanese representative Kenichiro Sasae said to reporters.02br
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00Citing an unidentified diplomatic source, Japanese Kyodo news reported that North Korea requested fuel oil which was an equivalent to two million ton, and it took the other participant countries by surprise. 02br
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00 00Dear Senators02br
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00 00 00Republic of Korea and the United states have kept common interests and values in East Asia as well as in the world. Two nations have deeply recognized the value of democracy in the world. We also have conviction that free trades make the world prosperous. As a firm and reliable partner, ROK has gradually enhanced economic ties with the United States. The Korea-U.S. Free Trade Agreement is one of these efforts to further our partnership for better lives of both countries00’00 people. 02br
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00 00The FTA is equally beneficial for both countries for two reasons. Firstly, it will spur more investment on each country. With opening more markets, two countries00’00 enterprises can enjoy more chances to get profit. Simultaneously, the FTA will make us more attractive for Foreign Direct Investment which target on ROK and the U.S. due to deterring trade barriers. Secondly, the FTA will be a pillar for the economic balance in East Asia. Growing China00’00s clout should be balanced by the firm economic alliance between other nations. The FTA will become one of main factors for two nations to maintain economic power in East Asia.02br
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00I wish Senators now have wisdom to choose more prosperous future of the U.S. as well as you did excellently. The FTA with ROK will demonstrate that the U.S. has a will for free trades with the world. I would really appreciate your commitment to further economic relations between ROK and the U.S. 02br
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