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In recent years, we have been witness to rise advertisement in the field of children. This approach can be more bad influence on children rather than good impact I would advocate widely advertising should be Limited Promote culture of consumerism is one creamery impact advertising can foster materialism values in children and Encouraging them to equate Their self worth with the products they own.they always want New and latest toys which shows in TV advertising. This can have 2 major negative impact. Firstly, if you as a parent accept constantly their desires and provide, they might become selfish personality who want anything anywhere without a little Effort and finally, they might become individuals who don’t grateful for what they have if you don’t answer to their increasingly desire that comes from colorful wonderful advertisement All of which can impact their mental well-being and social relationship Furthermore, promotion of unhealthy product should not be overlooked many advertisement, target children with unhealthy food, such as cake, sugary drinks, junk food, fast food, and they have significantly skill to lure children With glorifying and delicious show off their products, and it’s misleading for our children who have limited cognitive skills leading to make poor choices based on the information presented And beyond that we will witness weight rate is undergoing a shift away from normal weight towards obesity among youth To sum up in my opinion, some measures should be taken to control widely advertisement in the field of children, and it is very important advertising be balance against encouraging children to make an informed decision and prevent from negative influence mental and physical health-wise on our children