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Nik Posted 13 years ago
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Please, correct my essay.

The announcement says that the third floor of main library will be turned into a silent study area. One reason for that change is that studies show that many students learn better without any noise or distraction. According to the announcement, the library stuff currently spends too much time to responding to noise complaints about groups on the third floor.
In the conversation, the woman says that she thinks the change is an unfair idea and gives two personal details.
First, she explains that library doesn’t create a space that’s completely quiet just for them. That’s because student can wear earplugs if they want to study on the third floor.
Next, the woman says that the third floor is the best place for groups of students talking. The student mentions that third floor has couches and large tables, so people meet there. Instead of making it a silent area, they should make it a group meeting space.
  

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The announcement says that the third floor of the main library will be turned into a silent study area. One reason for that change is that studies show that many students learn better without any noise or distraction s . According to the announcement, the library staff currently spends too much time ( to...

  • The announcement says that the third floor of the main library will be turned into a silent study area.
  • One reason for that change is that studies show that many students learn better without any noise or distraction s .
  • According to the announcement, the library staff currently spends too much time ( to...
  • not necessary) responding to noise complaints about groups on the third floor.
  • In the conversation, the woman says that she thinks the change is an unfair idea and gives two personal details.
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The announcement says that the third floor of the main library will be turned into a silent study area. One reason for that change is that studies show that many students learn better without any noise or distractions. According to the announcement, the library staff currently spends too much time (to... not necessary) responding

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